http://hunch-ofjustice.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] hunch-ofjustice.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] badfic_manor 2010-10-04 05:10 am (UTC)

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[Better not to push his luck. Not now, with everything so precarious.]

You continue to write in more and more dangerous characters. Soon they will take over, leaving the others to live in absolute terror.

A story without a moral center is not a good story. Too much senseless violence without consequences will make it lose its meaning. Especially as you do not allow us to stay dead.

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