[He smiles awkwardly as he tries to sum up Willy in his head; he can't get a read on him, not yet anyway]

I've encountered many situations in which curiousity was in fact deadly - however, it's also an innate human trait, and so is death, so I suppose the two should go hand in hand.

[Despite his earlier statement of hating sweets, Holmes glances at Willy, before dipping his pinkie into some of he excess chocolate in the pan, and placing it into his mouth]

...not bad. My bias makes it impossible to critique it fairly, but overall, not bad. You certainly have a talent.