andsuddenlydynamite: (!OD [happy] ^-^)
andsuddenlydynamite ([personal profile] andsuddenlydynamite) wrote in [community profile] badfic_manor 2011-11-24 03:04 am (UTC)

[He chuckled at the very serious business manner in which she approached the spaghetti. He took the fork next to the plate and handed it to her.]

Might be a bit easier with this.

[And he took his own fork, twirling the noodles onto it and took his bite. He paused thoughtfully... well it didn't suck.]

Not bad.

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